Blogging 201: Or, The Tantalising Tale of Timmy the Super; Superb Blue-wren

Continuing with Blogging 201 by WordPress Uni.

The current lesson is the all important first line.  The opener that reaches out and grabs the readers attention and drives questions that must be answered, so read on read on.

Had to write for assignment 5 different openings for this blog.

Cruel fate deals a heavy blow in the life of a young wren.
– always good to have some catchy disaster theme, we want to know it won’t happen to us.

Super success for the springy young Wren who overcame hardship and rose to the heights of his profession.
– Always good to have a success story and link it in someway to a fabled lifetime goal.  We all want to think I need to find out how he did it, I’ll be able to do the same thing.

It was a Dark and Stormy Night; the rain fell in sheets except for the occasional intervals when it was checked by a violent gust of wind which swept up the streets….
Hmm, I think that one has been done by someone before.
http://www.bulwer-lytton.com

The forest rang with the shrill clear sound of a high pitched voice, crying out challenge and authority to all who could hear.
– The old power game story, we want to know who, where, why and what effect this bold challenge will bring to the forest.

Take your time, the wind encouraged. Walk quietly and all with be revealed.  Look not for the answers that appear quickly, but rather look, feel, listen, and taste. There is much to know, much is hidden and much will be revealed for those who tread quietly.
– Well when you’re desperate for a fifth opening line, a page from my new novella will do nicely.

And so dear reader, assuming you are still there, hello? hello? we can adopt the opening line I always like best for this blog.
Tell you what we’ve been upto and let your judgement decide to read on or to quickly click away to something much more relevant in your life.

So dah dah!!!!

We went to visit Timmy today.
-I like the direct attention grabbing simplicity.
I’m betting you came over here to see what the birds are doing and that is just what is not going to change.

We went to visit Timmy today. Just to refresh the memories, we had visited this plucky young hero a few weeks before the holidays and found he had lost his tail. Completely!
Then over the next couple of weeks, Timmy not only began to regrow, but also take on his responsibilities as territorial defender for his female companions and their soon to be growing offspring.  -There is every good chance that the young that come from his territory are not his offspring, but rather the work of his next door neighbours.  But, don’t be sad,  Timmy’s genes live on with the females of the surrounding territories.  Its the way it works in Wrenland.

We had, because of trips to the family acres, depressing weather, hot weather, other places to go and just plain old laziness, not been back to see Timmy or indeed the entire Office area for over six weeks.  But, today, nice light, an early mark on the house duty(s), and we decided and afternoon trip would work.

I soon heard Timmy’s cry as we approached the corner on the track that he called home.  And.  There he was.  And with a nice rich full tail. Well done Timmy.
Local boy makes good!

Among his new duties were looking after about 4 or more young.  And they all looked just like “Dad”.  Short-tails.  Must only have been recently fledged.

So between feeding and rounding up the little ones, being harassed by the females, and being sure to take time to keep his nemesis, Tommy the Bigtail, in his own territory, Timmy has his work cut out.

And that is the way I overcome writing complex mind entrancing opening lines.
Simply show the pictures.
Enjoy Timmy.

Looking good in the look out bush. And what a tale!
Looking good in the look out bush. And what a tale!
Where did you get that tail?
Where did you get that tail?
When you have an itch you just gotta scratch it.
When you have an itch you just gotta scratch it.
Standing in the middle of the road and discussing territorial arrangements with his rival.
Standing in the middle of the road and discussing territorial arrangements with his rival.
Just like "Dad".  A tiny tailless terror.
Just like “Dad”. A tiny tailless terror.
One of the family.  Giving him encouragement to feed the kids?
One of the family. Giving him encouragement to feed the kids?
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5 thoughts on “Blogging 201: Or, The Tantalising Tale of Timmy the Super; Superb Blue-wren

    1. G,day Rodger thanks for stopping by. They may be pretty common, and mostly hard to work with for great shots, but I spent nearly an hour with this family and it was pretty enlightening to see their structured activity.

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  1. “It was a dark and stormy night …” … nah! “We went to visit Timmy today.” Yeah!!!

    Get to the point. Not quite understanding why you’re bothering with blogging lessons though. To me, you’ve pretty well got it nailed already.

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    1. G,day Rob, aka, Mr Subtlety.
      Ah astute reader that you are. Yep, we went to visit Timmy does it for me.
      I can’t get with the ‘blogging’ programme, tis true.
      After all, I’m still using it as a vehicle for the photos, the words are but support role.

      I think the cleverness of writing six intros using five was just a bit too clever even for me!

      Seeya

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  2. I adore Timmy! I especially like the photo of him, all feathers fluffed and preening his belly. He is a tidy, dapper fella.

    And, wow, Blogging U 201 – you will be all educated soon! 🙂

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